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Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. In your letter: when and where you hired it describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident

Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. In your letter: when and where you hired it describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident dj7d
Dear Sir, I am a recent customer of your rental company having I rented a car from your downtown outlet in Detroit. The car hired was an economy model vehicle which I rented from March 21st to the present. I would like to commend your company on their professionalism and the service offered, and as such I am sure you will handle my incident with these qualities. Unfortunately, I had an unavoidable accident involving the aforementioned vehicle and another party. The accident was caused by the other car failing to stop at the red light of the intersection I was passing through, and as such the second party collided into the driver's side of my automobile. The police were informed in Situ, whereupon they recorded information regarding the accident and the other driver’s insurance details. The police established the other driver's responsibility for the accident, and the second party's insurance company has been informed. I would like to request that a replacement vehicle be offered while my current vehicle is incapacitated. Once again, I would like to commend your company's professional attitude. Sorry to have caused these problems, Yours Sincerely, J. William.
Dear Sir,

I am a recent customer of your rental
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having I rented a car from your downtown outlet in Detroit. The car hired was an economy model
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vehicle
which I rented from March 21st to the present. I would like to commend your
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company
on their professionalism and the service offered, and as such I am sure you will handle my incident with these qualities.

Unfortunately, I had an unavoidable
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accident
involving the aforementioned
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vehicle
and another party. The
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accident
was caused
by the other car failing to
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stop
at the red light of the intersection I was passing through, and as such the second party collided into the driver's side of my automobile. The police
were informed
in
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Situ
, whereupon they recorded information regarding the
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accident
and the other driver’s insurance
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details
.

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The
police established the other driver's responsibility for the
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accident
, and the second party's insurance
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company
has
been informed
. I would like to request that a replacement
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vehicle
be offered
while my
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current
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vehicle
is incapacitated
. Once again, I would like to commend your
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company
's professional attitude.

Sorry to have caused these problems,

Yours
Sincerely
,

J. William.

IELTS letter Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. In your letter: when and where you hired it describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident

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192 words
6.0
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