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You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day.. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved

You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day. . However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved 8pqP

Dear Sir, I am writing in connection our college cafeteria. Every student must have their own memories and experience in the cafeteria. Since cafeteria is a place which is very close to everyone in the college. Cafteria is place where we not only eat food, but also get a chance to get some quality time friends and colleague. I am a final year student, It has been a long sine i have been wintness of development in our college campus. Our cafeteria is nicely bulid as for as the infrastructure is concerned. Seating arrangennt are perfect. Staff is veru much cooprative. The only thing which i would like to bring in your notice is the washing unit which is very close to the buffet seats. And sometime we get lot of noise and smell while our our meal. Though i will be no longer part of this college journey afer a few month. I would still like to share my feedback and opinion to make a seperate unit for washing area. I look forward to your reply on his concern. So that it will life easy for everyone in the college.

Dear Sir,

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cafeteria
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 memories and experience in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsnack barlunchroom
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cafeteria
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 close to everyone in the college.

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 quality time friends and colleague.

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cooprative
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 would like to bring in your notice is the washing unit which is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
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 close to the buffet seats. And sometime we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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 noise and smell while Possible typo: you repeated a wordour
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 meal.

“Though” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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afer
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. I would still
 like to share my feedback and opinion to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a Possible spelling mistake found.separate
seperate
 unit for washing area.

I look forward to your reply on his concern. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 that it will life easy for everyone in the college. 