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You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. EE1R
Dear Sir, Hope this mail finds you in a good health. With the help of this letter, I'd like to request some time off work to finish my ongoing qualification and how it'll be beneficial in my current role and will try to put forward some suggestions regarding my future work. As you're already aware of the fact that I am completing my Master's in Computer Science along with my current job from Harvard University online. Because it is a one-year course, I started to finish it side by side along with my present job, but now it is taking a toll, and it is quite tough for me to maintain a work-life balance. This program is really upskilling my current skill-set and will help in my day-to-day role and responsibilities, for instance, designing the application in terms of scale. After I will complete this, I will start implementing it in my current project and this will definitely help in scaling the architecture and will benefit the organization as well. Once again, I'd urge you to provide some time-off hectic schedule and will surely benefit me as well as the company in the long run. Yours Sincerely, ABC
Dear Sir,

Hope this mail finds you in a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
health. With the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of this letter, I'd like to request
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time off work to finish my ongoing qualification and how it'll be beneficial in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
current
role and will try to put forward
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
suggestions regarding my future work.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you're already aware of the fact that I am completing my Master's in Computer Science along with my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
current
job from Harvard University online.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
it is a one-year course, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to finish it side by side along with my present job,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
it is taking a toll, and it is quite tough for me to maintain a work-life balance.

This program is
really
upskilling my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
current
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
-set and will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in my day-to-day role and responsibilities,
for instance
, designing the application in terms of scale.

After I will complete this, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
implementing it in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
current
project and this will definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in scaling the architecture and will benefit the organization
as well
.

Once again, I'd urge you to provide
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time-off hectic schedule and will
surely
benefit me
as well
as the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
in the long run.

Yours
Sincerely
,

ABC
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IELTS letter You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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  American English
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197 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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