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You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • give details of the course • say how the course would be useful • explain how the company could help you do this course.

You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • give details of the course • say how the course would be useful • explain how the company could help you do this course. wBnqN
Dear John, I am writing this letter to you about share information online training course. Recently I saw on Eit institute website that they are going to held short marketing course on 20th of this month. This course help candidates to improve their skills in marketing field. I am wondering if you can book this course for me and allow me to go there. Baiscally its government fouded course and I can not book it by myself. It has to be book by employes. so I can learn some more things about marketing. As you know I am part of marketing team and I am thinking this course help me to sharp my skills. I am looking forword to hearing from you. Your faithfully, Mangdeep dhot
Dear John,

I am writing this letter to you about share information online training
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. Recently I
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saw
on
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Eit
institute website that they are going to
'Going to' requires the base form: "hold"
held
short
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
marketing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
on 20th of this month. This
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course
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help
candidates to
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improve
their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
in
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marketing
field.

I am wondering if you can book this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
for me and
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allow
me to go there.
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Baiscally
its
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government
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fouded
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course
and I can not book it by myself. It
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has to
be
Consider using a past participle here: "booked".
book
by
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employes
.
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so
I can learn
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some
more things about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
marketing
. As you know I am part of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
marketing
team and I am thinking this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to sharp my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.

I am looking
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forword
to hearing from you.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
,

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Mangdeep
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dhot
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IELTS letter You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • give details of the course • say how the course would be useful • explain how the company could help you do this course.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
125 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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