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Your son is learning a second language at school, but he needs some extra lessons

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Dear Sir, Hope you are doing good Sir. I am Ms. Sagarika kale, XYZ's mother. He is studying in 8th Grade. Thank you for sharing the score card with me. The overall scores looks pretty good. However, my son XYZ has been not scoring satisfactory in the second language and hence I am reaching out to you. I believe that my son requires extra attention and guidance in learning this language. I would also like to understand the teaching methods and techniques used in school. This would help me understand the structure and take a few revisions for XYZ at home. Also, could you please share your teaching experiences during the lectures. Do you face any hurdles like lack of concentration or interest while teaching the subject to my son. I really want my son to understand and grasp the language effectively. So I am requesting you to conduct a few extra sessions after the regular school hours. Please consider this as a sincere request to conduct lectures on every Monday & Thursday for an hour in the school library. Please convey your thoughts. Thanking you in anticipation. Yours truly, Sagarika kale
Dear Sir,

Hope you are doing
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good
Sir.

I am Ms.
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Sagarika
kale, XYZ's mother. He is studying in 8th Grade.

Thank you for sharing the score card with me. The
overall
scores looks pretty
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good
.
However
, my son XYZ has been not scoring satisfactory in the second language and
hence
I am reaching out to you.

I believe that my son requires extra attention and guidance in learning this language.

I would
also
like to understand the teaching methods and techniques
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in school. This would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me understand the structure and take a few revisions for XYZ at home.

Also
, could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
share your teaching experiences during the lectures. Do you face any hurdles like lack of concentration or interest while teaching the subject to my son.

I
really
want my son to understand and grasp the language
effectively
.
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So
I am requesting you to conduct a few extra sessions after the regular school hours.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
consider this as a sincere request to conduct lectures on every Monday & Thursday for an hour in the school library.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
convey your thoughts.

Thanking you in anticipation.

Yours
truly
,

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Sagarika
kale
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IELTS letter Your son is learning a second language at school, but he needs some extra lessons

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6.0
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