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You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem

You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem PVMed

Dear Mr. White, I am writing this letter in connection with the accommodation provided by the institute. I am pursuing Supply Chain Management which is an eight-month course. I am having so many issues in the facility provided by the college for my stay during the course. When I opted for this program, I was told that I will be getting a private room with shared kitchen and washrooms, instead, I am sharing my room with another student. The washrooms are also very dirty and stinky. I was wondering if you can shift me to a private room or refund me the legitimate amount as I have paid the price of a private room. In addition, the washrooms should also be cleaned more frequently. I would be grateful if you could look into this matter and provide me with the best possible solution at the earliest. Your Sincerely John Smith

Dear Mr. White,

I am writing this letter in connection with the accommodation provided by the institute. I am pursuing Supply Chain Management which is an eight-month course.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am having This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 issues in the facility provided by the college for my stay during the course. When I opted for this program, I was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 that I will be getting a private You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 with shared kitchen and washrooms, instead
, I am sharing my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 with another student. The washrooms are also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 dirty and stinky.

I was wondering if you can shift me to a private You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 or refund me the legitimate amount as I have paid the price of a private You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. In addition
, the washrooms should also
be cleaned
 more frequently
.

I would be grateful if you could look into this matter and provide me with the best possible solution at the earliest.

Your Sincerely


John Smith