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Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. Include: where you live what the problem is what he should do

Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. Include: where you live what the problem is what he should do DG97
Dear Emily, Hope you're doing great since we last met. I'm writing this letter to let you know that I'm planning for a vacation this month, and it'd be great if you could join with me for this trip. Last year was so hard to handle with the lockdown and loneliness. I really got burnt out of work and I can't showcase my full potential nowadays. My manager advises me to take some time off to rejuvenate myself and relax over. So, I'm planning to visit Marsala, a beautiful coral remote village located near Kerala which's surrounded by Arabian Sea. I visited the place once when I went on a trekking with my local group. By mid of next month, I'm planning to visit the place again. As a regular trekker yourself, I believe that this vacation will give an opportunity for you too to experience this astonishing place. This will surely elevate your love for the country also. It won't be the same without you and I'd be more than happy if you join this vacation with me. With love, Sriram.
Dear Emily,

Hope you're doing great since we last met. I'm writing this letter to
let
you know that I'm planning for a vacation this month, and it'd be great if you could
join
with me for this trip.

Last year was
so
hard
to handle with the lockdown and loneliness. I
really
got
burnt out of work and I can't showcase my full potential nowadays. My manager advises me to take
some
time off to rejuvenate myself and relax over.

So
, I'm planning to visit Marsala, a
beautiful
coral remote village located near Kerala which's surrounded
by Arabian Sea
. I visited the place once when I went on a trekking with my local group. By mid of
next
month, I'm planning to visit the place again.

As a regular trekker yourself, I believe that this vacation will give an opportunity for you too to experience this astonishing place. This will
surely
elevate your
love
for the country
also
. It won't be the same without you and I'd be more than happy if you
join
this vacation with me.

With
love
,

Sriram.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. Include: where you live what the problem is what he should do

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
182 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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