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You are student at a language school in New Zealend studying Business English

You are student at a language school in New Zealend studying Business English gq6x3
Dear Mr ScheerI am writing this letter to expressmy deep disappointment with the news that the work placement programme has been cancelledthis summer. One of the main reasons i chose to study Businnes English at your school in July and August was the chance to participate in the work placement programme. There are many English schools in California that offer business EnglishI look forward to receiving your replyYours sincerelyJames Charles
Dear Mr
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ScheerI
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am
writing this letter to
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expressmy
deep disappointment with the news that the work placement
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programme
has been
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cancelledthis
summer. One of the main reasons
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i
chose to study
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Businnes
English at your school in July and August was the chance to participate in the work placement
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programme
. There are
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many
English schools in California that offer business
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EnglishI
look forward to receiving your
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replyYours
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sincerelyJames
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Charles
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IELTS letter You are student at a language school in New Zealend studying Business English

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  American English
1 paragraphs
69 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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