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One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his/her new business. Write a letter to reply to your friend's offer. In your letter, give your opinion of your friend's business idea tell him/her whether or not you have decided to accept the offer and explain your reasons for this decision

One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his/her new business. Write a letter to reply to your friend's offer. In your letter, give your opinion of your friend's business idea tell him/her whether or not you have decided to accept the offer and explain your reasons for this decision xrOo
Dear Atiqa, It’s a pleasure being in touch with you after so long. Hope you are doing well. I’m very excited to hear about your new venture, and hope that you will be successful in it. I think opening a day care center is an excellent idea, as there aren’t many day care in your area, hence, your initiative will be supportive for many working mothers. Even though it’s a good idea and it would be privilege for me to work with you. But with regrets, I have to decline your proposal to join as a business partner. Actually, the new job which I have joined recently as an academic manager is quite tough, and this role has a lot of responsibilities. Apart from workload, I have signed a two year contract with this company, which state that neither I can leave this position nor I can work with any other organization during my tenure. Hope that you will accept my apology and I wish you all the best for your new project. Call me anytime if you need any kind of help from me. Hope to meet you soon. With love, Naina
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Atiqa
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It’s a pleasure being in touch with you after
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long. Hope you are doing well. I’m
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very
excited to hear about your new venture, and hope that you will be successful in it.

I
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think
opening a day care center is an excellent
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idea
, as there aren’t
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many
day care in your area,
hence
, your initiative will be supportive for
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many
working mothers.
Even though
it’s a
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good
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idea
and it would be privilege for me to work with you.
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But
with regrets, I
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have to
decline your proposal to
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join
as a business partner.

Actually, the new job which I have
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joined
recently as an academic manager is quite tough, and this role has
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a lot of
responsibilities. Apart from workload, I have signed a
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two year
contract with this
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company
, which state that neither I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
this position nor I can work with any other organization during my tenure.

Hope that you will accept my apology and I wish you all the best for your new project. Call me anytime if you need any kind of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
from me.

Hope to
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meet
you
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soon
.

With
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love
,

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Naina
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IELTS letter One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his/her new business. Write a letter to reply to your friend's offer. In your letter, give your opinion of your friend's business idea tell him/her whether or not you have decided to accept the offer and explain your reasons for this decision

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