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Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take GaNj
Dear Mr Han, I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not be able to complete my course. I am enrolled in the part time analytics course offered by your institute in the evenings and the reason I selected this schedule is due to the fact that it fits my full time job arrangement. I had informed regarding the course and its timings to my human resources department before I confirmed my enrolment with you. However, I am informed now by my employer that a new project has been assigned to me which requires my involvement during evenings for at least 6 months. Since this assignement is critical for both the company & for me individually as well, it will be difficult to continue in the course at this point of time. Considering the circumstances, I would regretably resign from the course and will prefer taking this up again after 6 months. Alternatively, if your institute can offer postponement of my classes for half a year from now. it will be much appreciated. Yours sincerely, John Wright
Dear Mr Han,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not be able to complete my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. I
am enrolled
in the
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
part time
analytics
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
offered by your institute in the evenings and the reason I selected this schedule is due to the fact that it fits my full time job arrangement.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
had informed regarding the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
and its timings to my human resources department
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
I confirmed my
Possible spelling mistake. 'enrolment' is British English.
enrolment
with you.
However
, I
am informed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
by my employer that a new project has
been assigned
to me which requires my involvement during evenings for at least 6 months. Since this
Possible spelling mistake found.
assignement
is critical for both the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
& for me
individually
as well
, it will be difficult to continue in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
at this point of time.

Considering the circumstances, I would
Possible spelling mistake found.
regretably
resign from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
and will prefer taking this up again after 6 months.
Alternatively
, if your institute can offer postponement of my classes for half a year from
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
it
will be much appreciated.

Yours
sincerely
,

John Wright
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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