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You are pregnant and unfortunately unwell. Write to your boss for maternity leave. Introduce your slef discuss medical grounds mention about your pending leaves

You are pregnant and unfortunately unwell. Write to your boss for maternity leave. Introduce your slef discuss medical grounds mention about your pending leaves qQ23w
Dear Sir, I write this letter to inform you that I am seven months pregnant. I am currently receiving medical treatment and my doctore has given 25th November 2022 as the due date for delivery. I have low vitamins and feel lethargic. I am not comfortable to look after myself at this point. Hence, instead to 8 weeks leaves starting from 8th November 2015, I need 4 week extra to cope up with my healh conditions. Additonally, I want to inform you that I have full annual leave allowace plus one month maternity leaves pending in my account. I have attached the medical certificated provided by my hospital for your reference. I wish to join office as soon as my circumstances change in my favor. If it is so, I will notify you well in advance. I request you to approve my leave at the earliest. Thanking you, Sincerely yours, Hiral Patel Employee ID: 98719728
Dear Sir,

I write this letter to inform you that I am seven months pregnant. I am
currently
receiving medical treatment and my
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doctore
has
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given
25th November 2022 as the due date for delivery.

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I
have low vitamins and feel lethargic.
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I
am not comfortable to look after myself at this point.
Hence
,
instead
to 8 weeks
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leaves
starting from 8th November 2015, I need 4
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week
extra to cope up with my
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healh
conditions.
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Additonally
, I want to inform you that I have full annual
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leave
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allowace
plus one month maternity
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leaves
pending in my account. I have attached the medical certificated provided by my hospital for your reference.

I wish to
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join
office as
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soon
as my circumstances
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change
in my favor. If it is
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so
, I will notify you well in advance. I request you to approve my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leave
at the earliest.

Thanking you,

Sincerely
yours,

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Hiral
Patel

Employee ID: 98719728

IELTS letter You are pregnant and unfortunately unwell. Write to your boss for maternity leave. Introduce your slef discuss medical grounds mention about your pending leaves

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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