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Dear Mr. David, I am writing to apply for the position of English tutor for your son. I am 19 years old and currently, I am a student at Quy Nhon University, majoring in the English Language. I worked as a waiter in a coffee shop. I also teach English to the youngers near the house. Although I haven't much experience, I believe with my English knowledge will help your son relearn and master basic English, and then he can get a good score. I consider myself to be enthusiastic, and hard-working. I enjoy working with children and have good communication skills. I would be grateful if you consider my application. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Le Thi Bich Tram.
Dear Mr. David,

I am writing to apply for the position of English tutor for your son.

I am 19 years
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, I am a student at
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Quy
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Nhon
University, majoring in the English Language.

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I
worked as a waiter in a coffee shop.
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I
also
teach English to the
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youngers
near the
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house
. Although I haven't much experience, I believe with my English knowledge will
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help
your son relearn and master basic English, and then he can
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get
a
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good
score.

I consider myself to be enthusiastic, and
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hard
-working. I enjoy working with children and have
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good
communication
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skills
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would be grateful if you consider my application.
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I
look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Le
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Thi
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Bich
Tram.

IELTS letter write a letter apply for the job

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
124 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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