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write a letter giving advice for your friends where should you go and what should you see

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How are you? Thanks for your letter. I’m very happy to hear that you want to travel around my country. / I’m only too glad to help. Here are some things you can go and see when coming to my country. First of all, I think you should come to Ha Noi. It’s the capital of Viet Nam. You book a ticket to come to Noi Bai International Airport. In Ha Noi, you can go to Quoc Tu Giam Temple. This is the first university in my country. Or going to Ho Tay have a poetic landscape, Ho Chi Minh Mausoleum. This place is very famous that many tourists want to visit once. Besides that, you should visit Saint Joseph's Church. It’s beautiful and ve special design. Have you thought about going to Da Nang? Da Nang is a very beautiful and interesting city. It is famous for its delicious food and many entertainment centers. the best thing about Da Nang is has beautiful beaches, white-sand beaches. It has a lot of beautiful sights such as Ngu Hanh Son, Son Tra mountain, My Khe beach, Hai Van Pass…Maybe you should visit the Dragon Bridge, especially at night. You can see it sprouts fire and water. Why don’t you visit my hometown? It’s Quy Nhon city. Quy Nhon has a long beach, many beautiful sights such as Hon Kho, EO Gio, Bai Trung and so on…. with a sunny climate, fresh atmosphere maybe you’ll like this city. I hope my advice helps. Please write soon. I look forward to seeing you.
How are you? Thanks for your letter. I’m
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very
happy to hear that you want to travel around my country. / I’m
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only
too glad to
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help
. Here are
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some
things you can go and
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see
when coming to my country.

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First of all
, I
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think
you should
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come
to Ha
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Noi
. It’s the capital of
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Viet
Nam. You book a ticket to
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come
to
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Noi
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Bai
International Airport. In Ha
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Noi
, you can go to
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Quoc
Tu
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Giam
Temple. This is the
first
university in my country. Or going to Ho
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Tay
have a poetic landscape, Ho Chi Minh Mausoleum. This place is
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very
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famous
that
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many
tourists want to
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visit
once.
Besides
that, you should
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visit
Saint Joseph's Church. It’s
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beautiful
and ve special design.

Have you
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thought
about going to
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Da
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Nang
?
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Da
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Nang
is a
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very
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beautiful
and interesting city. It is
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famous
for its delicious food and
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many
entertainment centers.
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the
best thing about
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Da
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Nang
is
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has
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beautiful
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beaches
, white-sand
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beaches
. It
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has
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a lot of
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beautiful
sights such as
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Ngu
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Hanh
Son, Son
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Tra
mountain, My
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Khe
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beach
,
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Hai
Van Pass…
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Maybe
you should
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visit
the Dragon Bridge,
especially
at night. You can
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see
it sprouts fire and water.

Why don’t you
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visit
my hometown? It’s
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Quy
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Nhon
city.
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Quy
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Nhon
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has
a long
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beach
,
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many
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beautiful
sights such as Hon
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Kho
, EO
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Gio
,
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Bai
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Trung
and
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so
on….
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with
a sunny climate, fresh atmosphere maybe you’ll like this city.

I hope my advice
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helps
.
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Please
write
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soon
. I look forward to seeing you.
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IELTS letter write a letter giving advice for your friends where should you go and what should you see

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
260 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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