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Dear Karen, hope you are doing well.You would be surprised,if I share a matter with you.i will be there in a week if every formalities have gone DDear Karen, hope you are doing well.You would be surprised,if I share a matter with you.i will be there in a week if every formalities have gone smoothly

Dear Karen, hope you are doing well. You would be surprised, if I share a matter with you. i will be there in a week if every formalities have gone DDear Karen, hope you are doing well. You would be surprised, if I share a matter with you. i will be there in a week if every formalities have gone smoothly OEp2y
Dear Karen, hope you are doing well. You would be surprised if I share a matter with you. I will be there in a week, if every formalities have been gone smoothlyI have received my student visa last week. I decided to study MBA in one of the best universities in UK. But I am unaware of the part-time jobs that suits to me. I want to know, the timings, type of jobs, accommodation and salary. However, I am trying to get details through Google, but that not much reliable. So, if you get a convenient time, can you search it for as you know it is necessary those who come with student visa. Besides, congratulations on your victory in cricket. you have made me proud, dude. love you. Could you please contact me if you find a suitable job for me. Hope we will meet you soon.
Dear Karen, hope you are doing well. You would
be surprised
if I share a matter with you. I will be there in a week, if every
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formalities
have
been gone
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smoothlyI
have received my student visa last week. I decided to study MBA in one of the best universities in UK.
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But
I am unaware of the part-time jobs that suits to me. I want to know, the timings, type of jobs, accommodation and salary.
However
, I am trying to
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get
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details
through Google,
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but
that not much reliable.
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So
, if you
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get
a convenient time, can you search it for as you know it is necessary those who
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come
with student visa.
Besides
, congratulations on your victory in cricket.
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you
have made me proud, dude.
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love
you. Could you
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please
contact me if you find a suitable job for me. Hope we will
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meet
you
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soon
.

IELTS letter Dear Karen, hope you are doing well. You would be surprised, if I share a matter with you. i will be there in a week if every formalities have gone DDear Karen, hope you are doing well. You would be surprised, if I share a matter with you. i will be there in a week if every formalities have gone smoothly

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  American English
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148 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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