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You are going to abroad.tlask your friend about the part time job there.get help from him

You are going to abroad. tlask your friend about the part time job there. get help from him NWN70

Dear Sums, Hope you are doing well. As you told, I have decided to study abroad and I chose MBA in hospital management. The problem is, I am unaware of part time jobs there. if you could have help me, that would be great. I have received my student visa, last week. If everything gone smoothly, i will be there in a month. As you have been there for 5years, you may know about the jobs there. Even though I got much information through Google, but that not reliable to me. All informationgiven are fake. Moreover, if you get a convenient time, can you please search a suitable job for me and I need to know about the timings, offers, accomodation. When you get much information regarding the above, contact me in my new number 34555456. Besides, congratulations on your success in entrance exam. Hope your parents are doing well. convey my regards to them

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help
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 much information regarding the above, contact me in my new number 34555456. Besides
, congratulations on your success in entrance exam.

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