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Write a letter to your friend In your letter thank your friend for the Holiday ,explain that your left your wallet in their House ,give them instruction on How to send it back

Write a letter to your friend In your letter thank your friend for the Holiday, explain that your left your wallet in their House, give them instruction on How to send it back n6NrK
Dear Alex, How are you and the Family? I am glad you invited me to spend the Christmas Holiday with you and the Family. It was one of the best Holidays I have had in such a long time, I really enjoyed seeing the Country’s various attraction Centres. Paris is a beautiful Country I must say, I guess that must have been the reason you are reluctant to leave the Country. Can you remember my pink wallet with red roses at the back of it, given to me by my Aunt Sarah? I realised I forgot it at your House during the Christmas Vacation, It is at the bottom drawer of the Shelf close to the Lamp Stand in the guest room. I would appreciate it, if you could send the wallet back to me as some of my means of Identification such as my Driver’s license, National Identity Card are stored in that wallet, Kindly be a dear and send it to the following Address: No 10 Lance Street, Carlton Road 4SW 4EI My love to your Family Best Wishes Your Friend Susan
Dear Alex,

How are you and the Family? I am glad you invited me to spend the Christmas Holiday with you and the Family. It was one of the best Holidays I have had in such a long time, I
really
enjoyed seeing the Country’s various attraction
Centres
. Paris is a
beautiful
Country I
must
say, I guess that
must
have been the reason you are reluctant to
leave
the Country.

Can you remember my pink wallet with red roses at the back of it,
given
to me by my Aunt Sarah? I
realised
I forgot it at your
House
during the Christmas Vacation, It is at the bottom drawer of the Shelf close to the Lamp Stand in the guest room.

I would appreciate it, if you could
send
the wallet back to me as
some
of my means of Identification such as my Driver’s license, National Identity Card
are stored
in that wallet, Kindly be a dear and
send
it to the following Address: No 10 Lance Street, Carlton Road 4SW 4EI

My
love
to your Family

Best Wishes

Your Friend

Susan
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend In your letter thank your friend for the Holiday, explain that your left your wallet in their House, give them instruction on How to send it back

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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