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You are planning a trip for you and your family to a resort in a foreign country. Write a letter to the manager of the resort.

You are planning a trip for you and your family to a resort in a foreign country. Write a letter to the manager of the resort. b3YbP
Dear Sir/Madam, Trust this letter finds you well I, along with my friends, am planning a trip to Phuket town prior to the coming New Year, which will last for a fortnight starting from 30th December to 14th January 2021. Hence, I would like to seek a few details about the arrangements at your Marina resort, situated near Patong Beach. The total number of people includes 3 couples and 2 adolescents. Regarding things-to-do, I tried to browse about the fire show, but, couldn't get much information, would you please share some insight on the aforesaid? Although I have planned a specific set of activities offered such as pool parties, scuba diving, however, I will appreciate if you can recommend some of your best-served activities for families. Though, Thailand is known for its exquisite cuisine which offers a variety of sea-food. I would also like to seek some suggestions regarding any vegetarian plus family-oriented restaurants that can be visited during our stay, since some of the people in our group, do not prefer animal-based delicacies. Thank you so much for your time and support. Looking forward to hearing from you soon Regards, Swarnim Tripathi
Dear Sir/Madam,

Trust this letter finds you well

I, along with my friends,
am
planning a trip to Phuket town prior to the coming New Year, which will last for a fortnight starting from 30th December to 14th January 2021.
Hence
, I would like to seek a few
details
about the arrangements at your Marina resort, situated near
Patong
Beach. The total number of
people
includes 3 couples and 2 adolescents.

Regarding things-to-do, I tried to browse about the fire
show
,
but
, couldn't
get
much information, would you
please
share
some
insight on the aforesaid? Although I have planned a specific set of activities offered such as pool parties, scuba diving,
however
, I will appreciate if you can recommend
some
of your best-served activities for families.

Though, Thailand
is known
for its exquisite cuisine which offers a variety of sea-food. I would
also
like to seek
some
suggestions regarding any vegetarian plus family-oriented restaurants that can
be visited
during our stay, since
some of the
people
in our group, do not prefer animal-based delicacies.

Thank you
so
much for your time and support.

Looking forward to hearing from you
soon


Regards,

Swarnim
Tripathi
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IELTS letter You are planning a trip for you and your family to a resort in a foreign country. Write a letter to the manager of the resort.

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
192 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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