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Dear sir or madamI am writing this letter to let you know I have been considering some problems, while studying because of my roommate. I am zarina, second year post graduation in your institution. Let me explain my situation. The trouble started last month when my roommate changed. My roommate was very considerate and she never disturbed me in my studies but she also give help me in my academics. However, my new housemate is a complete opposite of her. She sleeps late at night and play guitar. Due to which I am unable to sleep properly and cannot concentrate on studies. Although, I have requested him almost every night but she never entertain my request. Would you please change my room or roommate? . I am fine with any type of accommodation or I will not mind with whom I will be living until I am not getting disturbed in my studies. Thank you for your consideration. Your faithfully

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