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Write to manager of the restaurants

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Dear sir or madamI am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the food that I ordered yesterday at your restaurant Tanho located at Beshrabot. Last night, I and my family went to your restaurant as my friend recommeded it and celebrate my birthday party. We ordered three portions shashlik and chilly chicken. However, the food was served late and food was cold, awful. Despite this when I inquired about it to the waitrer, he was rude and dud not bother to listen. Furthermore, I feel the price of the items on the menu is a bit expensive compared to the quantity being served. I hope you can emphasize with my situation and will take the necessary actions. Moreover, I request you to provide me with a concession on my last meal or a meal discount coupon on my next order I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Your faithfully.
Dear sir or
madamI
am
writing to express my dissatisfaction with the food that I ordered yesterday at your restaurant
Tanho
located at
Beshrabot
. Last night, I and my family went to your restaurant as my friend
recommeded
it and celebrate my birthday party. We ordered three portions
shashlik
and chilly chicken.
However
, the food
was served
late and food was
cold
, awful. Despite this when I inquired about it to the
waitrer
, he was rude and dud not bother to listen.
Furthermore
, I feel the price of the items on the menu is a bit expensive compared to the quantity
being served
. I hope you can emphasize with my situation and will take the necessary actions.
Moreover
, I request you to provide me with a concession on my last meal or a meal discount coupon on my
next
order I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon
. Your
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter Write to manager of the restaurants

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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