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explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear neighbors, I am Chadi Fakhry, the new owner of the second floor in Sunrise building. I have recently received your complaint letter regarding the noise coming out of my flat. This noise is due to some renovation that must be done inside before my family move in. The apartment has leakage problems on top of some broken tiles. Using restrooms as they are is almost impossible, Moisture is always there and water is penetrating under the tiles toward the main concrete of the building thus, potential rusting for the iron of the building's backbone. I really apologize for the noise coming out due to the exerted work, I fully understand your complaint. I promise to finish the work as fast as possible and I will shorten the work time to be between Ten AM and Four PM. The work will not last for more than 3 days. Should anyone have any more to concern about, kindly feel free to contact me. Yours faithfully, Chadi Fakhry
Dear neighbors,

I am
Chadi
Fakhry
, the new owner of the second floor in Sunrise building.

I have recently received your complaint letter regarding the noise coming out of my flat. This noise is due to
some
renovation that
must
be done
inside
before
my family
move
in. The apartment has leakage problems on top of
some
broken tiles. Using restrooms as they are is almost impossible, Moisture is always there and water is penetrating under the tiles toward the main concrete of the building
thus
, potential rusting for the iron of the building's backbone.

I
really
apologize for the noise coming out due to the exerted
work
, I
fully
understand your complaint. I promise to finish the
work
as
fast
as possible and I will shorten the
work
time to be between Ten AM and Four PM. The
work
will not last for more than 3 days. Should anyone have
any more
to concern about, kindly feel free to contact me.

Yours
faithfully
,

Chadi
Fakhry
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IELTS letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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6 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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