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In modern times, many academic institutions are employing electronic activities and exercises to instruct courses to children both at school and at home. In this essay, I will outline the bad and good impacts of employing electronic activities and exercises on academic development. I will also examine solutions to reducing the bad impacts of these electronic activities.

In modern times, many academic institutions are employing electronic activities and exercises to instruct courses to children both at school and at home. In this essay, I will outline the bad and good impacts of employing electronic activities and exercises on academic development. I will also examine solutions to reducing the bad impacts of these electronic activities. Eq3Bq
Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing to express my interest in the position you advertised for help in your home for few hours next summer. As young adult I grew up helping my mom around the house by doing chores. In your home, I can assist by sweeping and mopping the kitchen floors, dust hard to reach places that maybe difficult for you reach, help clean up the garden specifically clear out any weeds growing etc. If accepted, this job will provide the extra money needed for a holiday vacation my friends are planning in Brisbane in the fall of next year. Additionally, it will cover all the cost for the excursions we all planned while on vacation such as the art museum tour and the food tour. Furthermore, my available times are Sundays from 1pm to 5pm, Wednesday and Thursday after school from 4pm-6pm. On Saturdays, there is basketball practice at the community center, Monday and Tuesday are babysitting days for my neighbor and Friday I hang out with my friends. Your Respectfully, John
Dear Mrs Barrett,

I am writing to express my interest in the position you advertised for
help
in your home for few hours
next
summer.

As
young adult I grew up helping my mom around the
house
by doing chores. In your home, I can assist by sweeping and mopping the kitchen floors, dust
hard
to reach places that maybe difficult for you reach,
help
clean up the garden
specifically
clear
out any weeds growing etc.

If
accepted
, this job will provide the extra money needed for a holiday vacation my friends are planning in Brisbane in the fall of
next
year.
Additionally
, it will cover all the cost for the excursions we all planned while on vacation such as the art museum tour and the food tour.

Furthermore
, my available times are Sundays from 1pm to 5pm, Wednesday and Thursday after school from 4pm-6pm. On Saturdays, there is basketball practice at the community center, Monday and Tuesday are babysitting days for my neighbor and Friday I hang out with my friends.

Your
Respectfully
,

John
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IELTS letter In modern times, many academic institutions are employing electronic activities and exercises to instruct courses to children both at school and at home. In this essay, I will outline the bad and good impacts of employing electronic activities and exercises on academic development. I will also examine solutions to reducing the bad impacts of these electronic activities.

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  American English
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174 words
6.5
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