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Write a letter of complaint about product and treatment you received from a shop

Write a letter of complaint about product and treatment you received from a shop R0NwG

Dear Sir/Madam, I wish to express my dissatisfaction with the product and treatment I received from a mobile world shop on western street. Firstly, On June 15th, I purchased a smartphone in your shop. A shop assistant recommended that the phone was high quality, and its functions were the best phone brand in the market. Therefore, I agreed to acquire it. However, after a few days the phone had some problems arose, which were not only on the inside but also on the outside. The first was the battery dies in less than an hour; the operating time was not enough to use. In addition, the charger's wire, which was not in good shape, was signs of being used and was messy in a box. Finally, hanging frequently is unacceptable. I can not do anything about it. It was worse than I expected. Immediately, I went back to the shop and spoke to the shop assistant about all. They said that they do not know whether or not to repair and just provided an appointment. The whole things, both the treatment and words, not showed a remorse. To make matter worse, from that time until now the phone has still not been repaired in spite of passing on over 20 days. I am extremely upset. As a dedicated customer, I just insist on a full refund or an immediate replacement as well as a apology from a shop assistant, or else I shall be forced to take further action. I expect to hear from you in the near future. Yours faithfully, DongPhung Thi Dong.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I wish to express my dissatisfaction with the product and treatment I received from a mobile world You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 on western street.

Firstly
, On June 15th, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 a smartphone in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
. A You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 assistant recommended that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 was high quality, and its functions were the best You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 brand in the market. Therefore
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 to acquire it. However
, after a few days the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 problems arose, which were not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 on the inside This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 on the outside. The first
 was the battery This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :passes away
dies
 in less than an hour; the operating time was not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. In addition
, the charger's wire, which was not in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 shape, was signs of being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 and was messy in a box. Finally
, hanging frequently
 is unacceptable. I can not do anything about it. It was worse than I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
.

Immediately, I went back to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 and spoke to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 assistant about all. They said that they do not know Consider shortening this phrase to just "whether". It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.whether
whether or not
 to repair and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 provided an appointment. The whole things, both the treatment and words, not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 a remorse. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 matter worse, from that time until This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 has still
 not been repaired
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
in spite of
 passing on over 20 days.

I am extremely
 upset. As a dedicated customer, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 insist on a full refund or an immediate replacement as well
 as Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 apology from a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 assistant, or else I shall be forced
 to take further
 action. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 to hear from you in the near future.

Yours faithfully
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