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Write a letter to your manager explaining your grievance with the parking situation at work. 1) Explain the problem 2) Explain the results 3) How you plan to solve the problem

Write a letter to your manager explaining your grievance with the parking situation at work. 1) Explain the problem 2) Explain the results 3) How you plan to solve the problem AjwEe
Dear Sam, I am writing to explain my resentment with the car parking place at work. The main concern which we are facing is not having separate parking for the two wheelers. We have to place our bicycle or motorbike in the same place which is provided for the cars. Moreover, we could see lots of damages in our vehicle because of the four-wheelers hitting our belongings when they take their cars. This results in unwanted quarrel between other employees. In addition, it reflects in their work and that reduces the productivity. Also, the staffs are unhappy because of the spoilage of their vehicles which caused by the car owners. I would suggest you allot a separate space for two and four wheelers to park their automobiles. Furthermore, separate entry and exit should be provided to avoid traffic congestion in the parking area. By providing separate pass will allow them to utilize the place allotted for them. I hope this will resolve the current issue. I look forward to receiving a positive response on this matter. Yours sincerely, Sarulatha
Dear Sam,

I am writing to
explain
my resentment with the car parking
place
at work.

The main concern which we are facing is not having
separate
parking for the
two wheelers
. We
have to
place
our bicycle or motorbike in the same
place
which
is provided
for the cars.
Moreover
, we could
see
lots of damages in our vehicle
because
of the
four-wheelers
hitting our belongings when they take their cars.

This results in unwanted quarrel between other employees.
In addition
, it reflects in their work and that
reduces
the productivity.
Also
, the staffs are unhappy
because
of the spoilage of their vehicles which caused by the car owners.

I would suggest you allot a
separate
space for two and four
wheelers
to park their automobiles.
Furthermore
,
separate
entry and exit should
be provided
to avoid traffic congestion in the parking area. By providing
separate
pass will
allow
them to utilize the
place
allotted for them. I hope this will resolve the
current
issue.

I look forward to receiving a
positive
response on this matter.

Yours
sincerely
,

Sarulatha
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager explaining your grievance with the parking situation at work. 1) Explain the problem 2) Explain the results 3) How you plan to solve the problem

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  American English
8 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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