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Imagine you went to your capital city on a day trip. Write an e-mail to your friend telling him/her about the day. Include information about the journey there, the people you went with, what you did and what you bought.

Imagine you went to your capital city on a day trip. Write an e-mail to your friend telling him/her about the day. Include information about the journey there, the people you went with, what you did and what you bought. VlmL3
Dear Zeynep, I'm really sorry for not writing earlier, after a day trip an Washington DC, we were so tired of shopping and other things. But thanks for your letter! It was great to hear front you so soon. You asked me to tell you about Washington DC. Well, it is a very stunning city especially in autumn when all trees are of different colors. Did you know? The city of Washington was named for George Washington (who picked the location), while the District of Columbia was named for Columbia, the personified goddess of the United States. I think Washington DC is definitely a one of a kind, after all it is the capital city of the United States. It is located between Virginia and Maryland on the north bank of the Potomac River. The city is home to all three branches of the federal government, as well as the White House, the Supreme Court and the Capitol Building. Can you believe that more than 500, 000 people live there. I had such a wonderful time with my family, and i had bought a special gift for you, just wait and see. I look forward to your reply. Your friend, Bayan
Dear
Zeynep
,

I'm
really
sorry for not writing earlier, after a day trip
an
Washington DC, we were
so
tired of shopping and other things.
But
thanks for your letter! It was great to hear front you
so
soon
.

You asked me to
tell
you about Washington DC. Well, it is a
very
stunning city
especially
in autumn when all trees are of
different
colors. Did you know? The city of Washington
was named
for George Washington (who picked the location), while the District of Columbia
was named
for Columbia, the personified goddess of the United States.

I
think
Washington DC is definitely a one of a kind,
after all
it is the capital city of the United States. It
is located
between Virginia and Maryland on the north bank of the Potomac River. The city is home to all three branches of the federal
government
,
as well
as the White
House
, the Supreme Court and the Capitol Building. Can you believe that more than 500, 000
people
live
there.

I had such a wonderful time with my family, and
i
had
bought
a special gift for you,
just
wait and
see
.

I look forward to your reply.

Your friend,

Bayan
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IELTS letter Imagine you went to your capital city on a day trip. Write an e-mail to your friend telling him/her about the day. Include information about the journey there, the people you went with, what you did and what you bought.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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