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You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: describe what the group does explain why the group is good for the community suggest alternative days and times for practice

Manager, The group name of my musician is alpha band that was created by our senior. This group is providing a training of music and dancing class to his client, its a very large company of company in my area that is providing the facilities of music. One of the most common and popular things of our is that peoples are cooperative and kindfull. They taught us very sincerely and provided a very long training session to his client, our musicians group has many opportunities for people they are came for training. the groups are arranged different activities related for music to entertain the people. By the company rules and policies they are provided only friday and tuesday evening for training and musical class. But the groups provided alternate day for our client to facilitate them. these days are having same activities as other day that are mentioned in rules of musician groups.
Manager,

The
group
name of my musician is alpha band that
was created
by our senior. This
group
is providing a
training
of music and dancing
class
to his client,
its
a
very
large
company
of
company
in my area
that is
providing the facilities of music.

One of the most common and popular things of our is that peoples are cooperative and
kindfull
. They taught us
very
sincerely
and provided a
very
long
training
session to his client, our musicians
group
has
many
opportunities for
people
they are
came
for
training
.
the
groups
are arranged
different
activities related for music to entertain the
people
.

By the
company
rules
and policies they
are provided
only
friday
and
tuesday
evening for
training
and musical
class
.
But
the
groups
provided alternate day for our client to facilitate them.
these
days are having same activities as other day that
are mentioned
in
rules
of musician
groups
.
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IELTS letter You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: describe what the group does explain why the group is good for the community suggest alternative days and times for practice

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
153 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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