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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter -describe the item you lost -explain how you lost it -tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir Or Madam, I am Mehdi who has been one of your clients for 10 years. I am writing this letter to you that I have lost my laptop recently. it was Lenovo Yoga model which costs approximately $2, 000. Also, the color of the laptop is white, and the specifications were Core-I7 with 4 megabyte memory plus SSD hard drive. I would you like to inform you that it happened on 29 august when I was on a flight. After I arrived the airport, I suddenly found out that I forgot to take my laptop when I was in the plane; therefore, I immediately notice the airport's staff. After a while, They advised me that hey could not find any laptops. Perhaps I should be informed you that I am a programmer and I always works with this device; As a result, I would be grateful If your company consider my situation and announce me how can I get a new laptop or at least the money of laptop to purchase this item again. In addition, my insurance number is 898722, and I attached receipt of it to this mail. I would appreciate it if you took action to my request in your earliest convenience time. Your sincerely, Mehdi Farokhtabar

Dear Sir Or Madam,

I am Mehdi who has been one of your clients for 10 years. I am writing this letter to you that I have lost my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 recently. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.It
it
 was Lenovo Yoga model which costs approximately $2, 000. Also
, the color of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 is white, and the specifications were Core-I7 with 4 megabyte memory plus SSD This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 drive.

I It appears that a comma is missing.would,
would
 you like to inform you that it happened on 29 august when I was on a flight. After I arrived the airport, I suddenly
 found out that I forgot to take my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 when I was in the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
; therefore
, I immediately notice the airport's staff. After a while, They advised me that hey could not find any laptops.

Perhaps I should be informed
 you that I am a programmer and I always The pronoun ‘I’ must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: “work”work
works
 with this device; As a result
, I would be grateful If your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 consider my situation and announce me how can I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 or at least the money of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 this item again. In addition
, my insurance number is 898722, and I attached receipt of it to this mail.

I would appreciate it if you took action to my request in your earliest convenience time.

Did you mean “Yours”? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
sincerely
,

Mehdi Possible spelling mistake found.
Farokhtabar