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pretination about Vietnam tourish 5Ak3B
Hello, my name's Song. I'm fourteen years old. Today, I will tell you about Vietnam tourish. Vietnam is the ideal destination for all tourists. In my country, there are many things to explore: food, scenery, people and traditions. . . Vietnam's landscape is really beautiful and diverse. Even though I'm Vietnamese, I still haven't fully explored my country. There are many beautiful places in Vietnam such as Ha Long Bay, Hoi An Ancient Town, Hanoi Capital, . . . In Ha Long Bay, there are many large and small islands, very majestic, Hoi An is the busiest street in Vietnam. In addition, Vietnam also attracts tourists because of its rich cuisine stretching from north to south. These are dishes such as: pho, banh mi, bun cha, bun bo Hue, and many more that I haven't mentioned. Not only that, Vietnamese people are very friendly and kind. Vietnamese traditions are also very special and rich, may be strange. I love vietnam and i think vietnam is a great destination for everyone. Thanks for listening!
Hello, my name's Song. I'm fourteen years
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tourish
. Vietnam is the ideal destination for all tourists. In my country, there are
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things to explore: food, scenery,
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people
and traditions.
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Vietnam's landscape is
really
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beautiful
and diverse.
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I'm Vietnamese, I
still
haven't
fully
explored my country. There are
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many
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beautiful
places in Vietnam such as Ha Long Bay,
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Hoi
An Ancient Town, Hanoi Capital
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In Ha Long Bay, there are
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many
large and
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islands,
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majestic,
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An is the busiest street in Vietnam.
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attracts tourists
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of its rich cuisine stretching from north to south. These are dishes such as:
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pho
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banh
mi, bun
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, bun
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Hue, and
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more that I haven't mentioned. Not
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that, Vietnamese
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people
are
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friendly and kind. Vietnamese traditions are
also
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special and rich, may be strange. I
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love
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vietnam
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vietnam
is a great destination for everyone. Thanks for listening!
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IELTS letter pretination about Vietnam tourish

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
173 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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