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Write a letter to your friend?s son on learning English as a second language. In your letter: Share your experience of learning a foreign language. Highlight advantages and Ask him to utilise the opportunity.

Write a letter to your friend? s son on learning English as a second language. In your letter: Share your experience of learning a foreign language. Highlight advantages and Ask him to utilise the opportunity. Apw1x
Dear Sam, I am John - a friend of your father. He asked me to advise you what language to choose for your carrere advance. The language I am positive is benefitial to know nowadays is English. I have been studying that language since school and till now I am working on its improvement every day. Moreover, I am combining the language learning process with professional skills improvement by reading books and listening to experienced people advice in English. As you may know English is considered international language, thus possessing communication skills is vital for traveling and socialising with other nations. Another thing that worth mentioning is any form of information that you can find on the internet in English, whereas you may have trouble doing the same in our native language. Your father told me that you have an option to take one of four foreighn languages to study in the university, as you may guess my advice is to go for English and make native speaker friend with whome you can chat every day. I hope you will find my sugestion usefull and feel free to contact me if you have any questions. Best regards, Karlen Borshikyan
Dear Sam,

I am John
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-
a friend of your father. He asked me to advise you what
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language
to choose for your
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carrere
advance.

The
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language
I am
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positive
is
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benefitial
to know nowadays is English. I have been studying that
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language
since school and till
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now
I am working on its improvement every day.
Moreover
, I am combining the
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language
learning process with professional
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skills
improvement by reading books and listening to experienced
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
advice in English.

As you may know English
is considered
international
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language
,
thus
possessing communication
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
is vital for traveling and
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socialising
with other nations. Another thing that worth mentioning is any form of information that you can find on the internet in English, whereas you may have trouble doing the same in our native language.

Your father
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told
me that you have an option to take one of four
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foreighn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
to study in the university, as you may guess my advice is to go for English and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
native speaker friend with
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whome
you can chat every day.

I hope you will find my
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sugestion
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usefull
and feel free to contact me if you have any questions.

Best regards,

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Karlen
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Borshikyan
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend? s son on learning English as a second language. In your letter: Share your experience of learning a foreign language. Highlight advantages and Ask him to utilise the opportunity.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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