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Invitation letter:to write a letter to your friend inviting her/him to attend the party

Invitation letter: to write a letter to your friend inviting her/him to attend the party W5nbD
Dear Nasibaxon I am writing this letter to personally invite you and your family members a birthday party. We are organising this party on 19th August at 5pm. On the 19th of August my daughter Begoyim turns 15and we are organising a party on this occasion. My husband and I invite you birthday party, you and your family are close friends of our family and to make our children happy. At the same time our parents are also dear friends that's why we propose you to our party while going on this tradition. At the party we organise various surprises, dances, songs to delight our children. I would like to add that on this day our children will also enjoy watching cartoons characters and dancing together. We have a delicious dinner and birthday cake at this party. Please confirm your presence on or before 17th August by contacting us 6011142. See you soon Shaxnoza
Dear
Nasibaxon
I am writing this letter to
personally
invite you and your family members a birthday
party
. We are
organising
this
party
on 19th August at 5pm. On the 19th of August my daughter
Begoyim
turns 15and we are
organising
a
party
on this occasion. My husband and I invite you birthday
party
, you and your family are close friends of our family and to
make
our children happy. At the same time our parents are
also
dear friends that's why we propose you to our
party
while going on this tradition.

At the
party
we
organise
various surprises, dances, songs to delight our children. I would like to
add
that on this day our children will
also
enjoy watching cartoons characters and dancing together. We have a delicious dinner and birthday cake at this
party
.
Please
confirm your presence on or
before
17th August by contacting us 6011142.
See
you
soon
Shaxnoza
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IELTS letter Invitation letter: to write a letter to your friend inviting her/him to attend the party

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
153 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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