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You are organising a charity event at your college to raise money for the local orphanage. Write a letter to a private business.

You are organising a charity event at your college to raise money for the local orphanage. Write a letter to a private business. 52ELD

Dear Mr Shelton, I am wring to you on behalf of the Estover Community College. Our college team are going to organise a charity event on the 25th of January, at 11 p. m. at the town club. The main purpose of the event is to support our local orphanage. We would be honoured if you and your partners could come and participate in the event. During the event, we will try to focus on our attention some issues, like involve as many people as possible and selling more products in low prices which are mady by college student and local hadicrafts. We hope that this event will be very interesting for you and you will not miss the opportunity of being sponsor for the charity. Please, let me know your response beforehand as soon as possible. Looking forward to seeing you then. I included some directions so that you do not get lost. Yours sincerely.

Dear Mr Shelton, I am wring to you on behalf of the Possible spelling mistake found.Est over
Estover
 Community College. Our college team are going to Possible spelling mistake. 'organise' is British English.organize
organise
 a charity You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
 on the 25th of January, at 11 p. m. at the town club. The main purpose of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
 is to support our local orphanage. We would be Possible spelling mistake. 'honoured' is British English.honored
honoured
 if you and your partners could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and participate in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
. During the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
, we will try to focus on our attention This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 issues, like involve as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 as possible and selling more products in low prices which are Possible spelling mistake found.mademanymayMaryLadylady
mady
 by college student and local Possible spelling mistake found.handicrafts
hadicrafts
. We hope that this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
 will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 interesting for you and you will not miss the opportunity of being Consider using a past participle here: "sponsored".sponsored
sponsor
 for the charity. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know your response beforehand as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. Looking forward to seeing you then. I included This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 directions This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that you do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 lost. Yours sincerely
. 