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You are moving to a new city for work and have just realized that an old friend lives in the city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Ask them for advice in finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for.

You are moving to a new city for work and have just realized that an old friend lives in the city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Ask them for advice in finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for. o2A9
Dear Sam, I hope this letter finds you in a radiant health and good spirit. It has been long time since we have talked. The purpose of the letters is to get some advice on searching new apartment in your city. My new job is in Manhattan, Hence in the light of the fact some recommendation on a Genuine real state agent will solve half of my problem. Couple of choices will give me a lot of freedom in making my decision. I will be working in down town New York, Therefore my Preference is neighboring areas. To commute daily will be easy on the other hand saves lot of time. My requirement is single bedroom well furnished apartment in the vicinity of my work place. Apartment should have facility of laundry and decent size kitchen. It would be nice if there is balcony to relax after work. Monthly budget for rent is up to 750 $. Waiting for your prompt reply in this matter. Yours Lovingly
Dear Sam, I hope this letter finds you in a radiant health and
good
spirit. It has been long time since we have talked. The purpose of the letters is to
get
some
advice on searching new apartment in your city.

My new job is in Manhattan,
Hence
in the light of the fact
some
recommendation on a Genuine real state agent will solve half of my problem. Couple of choices will give me
a lot of
freedom in making my decision.

I will be working in down town New York,
Therefore
my Preference is neighboring areas. To commute daily will be easy
on the other hand
saves
lot of
time.

My requirement is single bedroom well furnished apartment in the vicinity of my work place. Apartment should have facility of laundry and decent size kitchen. It would be nice if there is balcony to relax after work. Monthly budget for rent is up to
750 $
. Waiting for your prompt reply in this matter. Yours
Lovingly
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IELTS letter You are moving to a new city for work and have just realized that an old friend lives in the city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Ask them for advice in finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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