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Job in a new company happy to let u know

Job in a new company happy to let u know LGkJR

Dear Sanjeev, I hope you and your family are fine, and I am sorry that I haven’t been in touch recently. I am writing this letter to let you know that I have resigned from my previous company and took a new job recently. Do you remember that I was working for a start-up company and I told you that how much I am looking forward to change my job? Well I have joined a multinational company and my new job is very exciting. In my previous job I worked really hard but I wasn’t paid well. So I took up a new job because of the exposure and the important thing will have larger responsibility to showcase my talent. I was a bit nervous at the time of interview but eventually I got the Job as Manager Talent Acquisition. The remuneration in the new job is better and the working hours are less and very important thing is I am getting a larger role. I have also enrolled for an Executive MBA programme from XLRI to enhance my skills. By the way we would be shifting to Hyderabad as our new destination. I will send you the address would be great if you and your family would visit us once you are in India. I look forward to hear from you. With love, Rishabh Agarwal

Dear Sanjeev,

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let
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company
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new
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job
 recently.

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start
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 and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
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change
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joined
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hard
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but
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because
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important
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I was a bit nervous at the time of interview This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
eventually
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got
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
Job
 as Manager Talent Acquisition. The remuneration in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
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very
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is I am getting
 a larger role.

I have also
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programme
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XLRI
 to enhance my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. By the way we would be shifting to Hyderabad as our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
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send
 you the address would be great if you and your family would visit us once you are in India.

I look forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".to hearing
to hear
 from you.

With This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
,

Rishabh Agarwal