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Dear Mr Segun, How are you doing sir? I am writing this letter to you in regards to a job I want to apply for that require a reference letter. I am applying for the role of facility Manager at Glaxo Smith company in Apapa. this job will require my ability of storekeeping and also, data entry experience will be an added advantage. Unfortunately, the job requires a letter of reference from someone who is in the same field I am applying to. Your letter is very vital for me to secure this position. owing to the fact that you know me too well, you will be able to give details information about my character and my key strength to this organization. The letter will entail details of my experience, the job I did when I was under your supervision, and how many years you have known me. Yours sincerely, Obaloluwa Soyinka.
Dear Mr
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How are you doing sir? I am writing this
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to you
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in regards to
a
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job
I want to apply for that require a reference letter.

I am applying for the role of facility Manager at Glaxo Smith
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company
in
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Apapa
.
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this
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job
will require my ability of
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storekeeping
and
also
, data entry experience will be an
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advantage.

Unfortunately, the
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job
requires a
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of reference from someone who is in the same field I am applying to. Your
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is
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vital for me to secure this position.
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owing
to the fact that you know me too well, you will be able to give
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details
information about my character and my key strength to this organization.

The
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letter
will entail
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details
of my experience, the
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I did when I was under your supervision, and how
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years you have known me.

Yours
sincerely
,
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Obaloluwa
Soyinka.
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IELTS letter write a letter to your previous employer requesting for refence letter

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
152 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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