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You are living in an English speaking country and the restaurant near you is making a lot of noise. Write a letter to the restaurant owner. Cover the following: - tell restaurant owner to reduce the noise levels. - suggest a solution to fix the problem. - warn that if this problem remains not solved then further action will be taken.

You are living in an English speaking country and the restaurant near you is making a lot of noise. Write a letter to the restaurant owner. Cover the following: - tell restaurant owner to reduce the noise levels. - suggest a solution to fix the problem. - warn that if this problem remains not solved then further action will be taken. Ngmq
Dear Sir, My name is Rinkal Patel. I am living in a apartment next to your restaurant. I am writing this letter to complain about loud noice coming after 10: 30 pm. due to annoying for us. I know your hotel is renowad in our area hence, It has crowded every time but your kind information it is a residantial place so you do decrese music volume. My grandparents not sleep properly as well as I have two kids but they not focus on study only on because of your high sound. Moreover, every peoples came to tired at evening from their work thus, they feel extremely irritating. Please look into the matter urgently, If you want to play music after 10. 30 then you should slow the player. Furthermore, fix a noice proof glass in your hotel So every one take a rest and your customer enjoy party whole night. I hope you will co-operate and take immediate actions as soon as possible. otherwise, I will not hesitate to send you a legal notice. Hoping for a positive and prompt responce soon! Yours Faithfully, Rinkal Patel
Dear Sir,

My name is
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Rinkal
Patel. I am living in
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a
apartment
next
to your restaurant. I am writing this letter to complain about loud
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noice
coming after 10: 30 pm. due to annoying for us.

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I
know your hotel is
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renowad
in our area
hence
, It has crowded every time
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but
your kind information it is a
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residantial
place
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so
you do
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decrese
music volume. My grandparents not sleep
properly
as well
as I have two kids
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but
they not focus on study
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only
on
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because
of your high sound.
Moreover
, every peoples came to tired at evening from their work
thus
, they feel
extremely
irritating.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
look into the matter
urgently
, If you want to play music after 10. 30 then you should slow the player.
Furthermore
,
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fix
a
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noice
proof glass in your hotel
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So
every one take a rest and your customer enjoy party whole night.

I hope you will co-operate and take immediate actions as
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soon
as possible.
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otherwise
, I will not hesitate to
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send
you a legal notice.

Hoping for a
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positive
and prompt
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responce
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soon
!

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Rinkal
Patel

IELTS letter You are living in an English speaking country and the restaurant near you is making a lot of noise. Write a letter to the restaurant owner. Cover the following: - tell restaurant owner to reduce the noise levels. - suggest a solution to fix the problem. - warn that if this problem remains not solved then further action will be taken.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
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