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Write a letter to your colleague asking for help in setting up equipment for your presentation. In your letter, you should: • tell when and where the presentation will deliver • describe your arrangements • say him/her what equipment you need.

Write a letter to your colleague asking for help in setting up equipment for your presentation. In your letter, you should: • tell when and where the presentation will deliver • describe your arrangements • say him/her what equipment you need. EApM
Dear Gautam, I hope you had an amazing weekend. Anyways, I am writing this letter to seek help with setting up the equipment for tomorrow's meeting from your end. I have a presentation on "Digital Marketing" in the auditorium of the tower-1 building at 10 am. I would need your help in setting up the desired equipment for the presentation. You probably do not know that I have no experience in setting up such devices and you are kind of an expert in those things. I wonder if you can arrange the HDMI cable, mike, speakers, and projector for delivering my presentation because I have invited more than 100 people. Furthermore, I will be leaving from office after lunch as I have to reach the office tomorrow early morning to inspect all the necessary arrangements including the snacks and lunch during break time for all guests. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Shwatank
Dear Gautam,

I hope you had an amazing weekend.

Anyways, I am writing this letter to seek
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
with setting up the equipment for tomorrow's meeting from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
.

I have a presentation on
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
Digital Marketing
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
in the auditorium of the tower-1 building at 10 am. I would need your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in setting up the desired equipment for the presentation.

You
probably
do not know that I have no experience in setting up such devices and you are
If 'kind' is a classification term, 'an' is not necessary. Use "kind of". (The phrases 'kind of' and 'sort of' are informal if they mean 'to some extent'.)
kind of an
expert in those things. I wonder if you can arrange the HDMI cable, mike, speakers, and projector for delivering my presentation
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because
I have invited more than 100
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

Furthermore
, I will be leaving from office after lunch as I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
reach the office tomorrow early morning to inspect all the necessary arrangements including the snacks and lunch during break time for all guests.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Best regards,

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Shwatank
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your colleague asking for help in setting up equipment for your presentation. In your letter, you should: • tell when and where the presentation will deliver • describe your arrangements • say him/her what equipment you need.

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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