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You are living in a shared room with someone in hostel and she is not cooperate with you so kindly write a letter to accommodation manager for it.

You are living in a shared room with someone in hostel and she is not cooperate with you so kindly write a letter to accommodation manager for it. k5bqW
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to inform you about the problems which j am facing in my current accommodation with roommate It is very difficult for me to concentrate on my studies as my roommate always listen songs is a very high volume moreover her friends come in the room and stay there. I hope you will allow me to shift in another room. I am living in a hostel from last one year in shared accommodation My previous roommate was cooperative and friendly but my present roommate was totally opposite she's does not make adjustment with me as she's all the day listen songs and watching movies in a high volume due to which mg studies are suffering. I even did many time requests to her but she's not cooperate and I find it extremely difficult to live with her. I would like to request you kindly change my roommate or either change my room so that i can able to do my studies properly as my exams are also came near or you can also provide me a peaceful single room. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. Your's faithfully, Maria
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to inform you about the problems which j
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am
facing in my
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current
accommodation with
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roommate
It is
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very
difficult for me to concentrate on my studies as my
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roommate
always listen songs is a
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very
high volume
moreover
her friends
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come
in the
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room
and stay there. I hope you will
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allow
me to shift in another
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room
. I am living in a hostel from last one year in shared accommodation My previous
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roommate
was cooperative and friendly
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but
my present
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roommate
was
totally
opposite she's does not
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make
adjustment with me as she's all the day listen songs and watching movies in a high volume due to which mg studies are suffering.
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I
even did
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many
time requests to her
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but
she's not
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cooperate
and I find it
extremely
difficult to
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live
with her.
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I
would like to request you kindly
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change
my
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roommate
or either
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change
my
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room
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so
that
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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can able to
do my studies
properly
as my exams are
also
Consider using a past participle here: "come".
came
near or you can
also
provide me a peaceful single
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you
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soon
.
Did you mean "Your" or "Yours"?
Your's
faithfully
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Maria
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IELTS letter You are living in a shared room with someone in hostel and she is not cooperate with you so kindly write a letter to accommodation manager for it.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
196 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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