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You have just missed your friend's bithday party. Write a letter to apologise in your letter.

You have just missed your friend's bithday party. Write a letter to apologise in your letter. 9Qaew

Dear Ann I am writing to apologise for not participating your birthday party. I was going to yours with my whole family as well my son bought gift for you unfortunately, my son's temperature was rised suddenly. I was shokked and I had to go hospital. Therefore, I was not able to attend for your party. I know, there is your husband's birthday in next month. I'll try to go then We'll celebrate both birthdays togather. I hope you will understand my situation and you could forgive me. All the best Seu

Dear Ann I am writing to Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.apologize
apologise
 for not participating your birthday party. I was going to yours with my whole family as well
 my son This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 gift for you unfortunately, my son's temperature was Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "rose", the past tense form of the verb 'rise'?roseraisedriserisenrisesrisked
rised
suddenly
. I was Possible spelling mistake found.shocked
shokked
 and I had to go hospital. Therefore
, I was not able to attend for your party. I know, there is your husband's birthday in next
 month. I'll try to go then We'll celebrate both birthdays Possible spelling mistake found.togetherto gather
togather
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 hope you will understand my situation and you could forgive me. All the best Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphSeu.Seu!Seu?Seu:Seu,Seu;
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IELTS letter You have just missed your friend's bithday party. Write a letter to apologise in your letter.

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

91 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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