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You have just missed your friend's bithday party. Write a letter to apologise in your letter.

You have just missed your friend's bithday party. Write a letter to apologise in your letter. 9Qaew
Dear Ann I am writing to apologise for not participating your birthday party. I was going to yours with my whole family as well my son bought gift for you unfortunately, my son's temperature was rised suddenly. I was shokked and I had to go hospital. Therefore, I was not able to attend for your party. I know, there is your husband's birthday in next month. I'll try to go then We'll celebrate both birthdays togather. I hope you will understand my situation and you could forgive me. All the best Seu
Dear Ann I am writing to
apologise
for not participating your birthday party. I was going to yours with my whole family
as well
my son
bought
gift for you unfortunately, my son's temperature was
rised
suddenly
. I was
shokked
and I had to go hospital.
Therefore
, I was not able to attend for your party. I know, there is your husband's birthday in
next
month. I'll try to go then We'll celebrate both birthdays
togather
.
I
hope you will understand my situation and you could forgive me. All the best
Seu
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IELTS letter You have just missed your friend's bithday party. Write a letter to apologise in your letter.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
91 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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