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You are a member of a local group which provides a free service for your community. You have a special request for extra help. Write a letter to the group leader. – thank him/her for their work – explain what you need help with – suggest what you could do in return

You are a member of a local group which provides a free service for your community. You have a special request for extra help. Write a letter to the group leader. – thank him/her for their work – explain what you need help with – suggest what you could do in return 5ALNm
Dear Mr. Jones, Thank you very much for providing us with your free ‘Math for Mums and Dads’ lessons in the community center every day. I’m sure that these must take a long time to prepare. I have learnt such a lot from them and now feel more confident about helping my son with his homework. I was wondering if you could possibly give me any extra materials that I could use in my free time? I realize I could google this myself and find something on the internet but I thought you might be able to point me in the right direction if you have time. Perhaps I could make some photocopies and share them around so that other people can make use of them too? I know you’re very busy at the moment because it’s the start of term, so there’s no hurry. With many thanks in advance, Best wishes Fiona
Dear Mr. Jones,

Thank you
very
much for providing us with your free ‘Math for
Mums
and Dads’ lessons in the community center every day. I’m sure that these
must
take a long time to prepare. I have
learnt
such a lot from them and
now
feel more confident about helping my son with his homework.

I
was wondering if you could
possibly
give me any extra materials that I could
use
in my free time?
I
realize I could google this myself and find something on the internet
but
I
thought
you might be able to point me in the right direction if you have time.

Perhaps I could
make
some
photocopies and share them around
so
that other
people
can
make
use
of them too? I know you’re
very
busy at the moment
because
it’s the
start
of term,
so
there’s no hurry.

With
many
thanks in advance,

Best wishes

Fiona
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IELTS letter You are a member of a local group which provides a free service for your community. You have a special request for extra help. Write a letter to the group leader. – thank him/her for their work – explain what you need help with – suggest what you could do in return

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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