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Write a letter to a company to ask about having them develop a website for your business.

Write a letter to a company to ask about having them develop a website for your business. m295d
Dear Mr. Glazer, I am writing with regard to your services as a website designer. I have recently seen numerous samples of your work, and I would like to enquire about utilizing your services for my new website. I am a jewelry designer and proprietor of a retail business selling my creations. For this reason, I would like the website to reflect this characterization. One challenge that I foresee with the site is that it has to update regularly. That is because I frequently create new designs that must be visible to existing and potential customers. I possess some studio equipment. Therefore, I am capable of photographing the items myself. However, I would like you to design the site and then upload new content regularly. I would like you to provide me an offer, including prices, by email. I am available at the above phone number for any further clarifications you may need. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely yours, Jane Hart
Dear Mr.
Glazer
,

I am writing with regard to your services as a website designer. I have recently
seen
numerous samples of your work, and I would like to
enquire
about utilizing your services for my new website.

I
am a jewelry designer and proprietor of a retail business selling my creations.
For this reason
, I would like the website to reflect this characterization.

One challenge that I foresee with the site is that it
has to
update
regularly
.
That is
because
I
frequently
create new designs that
must
be visible to existing and potential customers. I possess
some
studio equipment.
Therefore
, I am capable of photographing the items myself.
However
, I would like you to design the site and then upload new content
regularly
.

I would like you to provide me an offer, including prices, by email. I am available at the above phone number for any
further
clarifications you may need.

I
look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Sincerely
yours,

Jane Hart
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a company to ask about having them develop a website for your business.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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