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You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is coming to the same city soon for several days.

You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is coming to the same city soon for several days. jQPbp
Dear John, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this as a request letter as you are visiting the same country currently i am staying in for some days. In response to your visiting, i wish to share you that i need some of my medicines that i really need. Unfortunately, I just forgot to keep them to myself while coming to this country. You know that i have been suffering from asthma since 2 years. I just left the medicines due to my hurry. It has been two days since i came to this new country. Due to extreme cold, residing here becomes a herculean task. In the meanwhile, i am preparing myself to make an arrangement for you. I can express my gratitude to accept you here. Besides, allow me to have a hotel fare for you and your future accomodation. In addition to it, there are some foods for you i need to manage. Therefore, it would be really appreciate if you kindly come here bringing my belongings. Yours faithfully Nayeem
Dear John,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this as a request letter as you are visiting the same country
currently
i
am staying in for
some
days.

In response to your visiting,
i
wish to share you that
i
need
some
of my medicines that
i
really
need. Unfortunately, I
just
forgot to
keep
them to myself while coming to this country.

You know that
i
have been suffering from asthma
since
2 years. I
just
left
the medicines due to my hurry. It has been two days since
i
came to this new country. Due to extreme
cold
, residing here becomes a
herculean
task.

In the meanwhile,
i
am preparing myself to
make
an arrangement for you. I can express my gratitude to accept you here.
Besides
,
allow
me to have a hotel fare for you and your future
accomodation
.
In addition
to it, there are
some
foods for
you
i
need to manage.

Therefore
, it would be
really
appreciate
if you kindly
come
here bringing my belongings.

Yours
faithfully


Nayeem
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IELTS letter You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is coming to the same city soon for several days.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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