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decision to stop giving under 18s cheap travel on buses.

decision to stop giving under 18s cheap travel on buses. 6poQW

Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing to express my disappointment at the council's recent decision to stop giving under 18s cheap travel on buses. I am a student, so discounts on tickets are useful for me. My main reason for objecting to the decision is that cheap travels are needed by children who does not have enough money for travel. Without cheap travels parents of children would spend more money on travels for their children. I realise that if travels will be more expensive, children will not have pocket money. With which they could buy themselves new books and stationery, rather than spending money on travel. All in all, I believe this is a very bad decision. There will be a negative effect on students and their parents' budget. Yours faithfully, T GURIEV

Dear Sir or Madam,

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stop
 giving under 18s This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
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travel
 on buses. I am a student, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 discounts on tickets are useful for me.

My main reason for objecting to the decision is that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekdrivingrideflyingexcursiontour
travels
are needed
 by children who Did you mean "do"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'children' should be used.do
does
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enough
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travel
. Without This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
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travels
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All in all, I believe this is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 decision. There will be a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 effect on students and their parents' budget.

Yours faithfully
,

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