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A friend who is planning to visit you has asked you to describe the most intersting and enjoyable things to do

A friend who is planning to visit you has asked you to describe the most intersting and enjoyable things to do AaLke

Dear shamim, Thanks for your email and I am so glad that you are arriving next weekend. This gives us another opportunity to share memories. It's been a long time that we've not met each other for a long time. You asked about the interesting things around our city. As you know, we have moved to Kish Island for 2 years. I would recommend that tourists visit here because it is one of the more interesting places in the world. For your accommodation I would suggest that you should stay in the Dariush hotel is a 5 stars luxurious and modern hotel. It is well-run and close to the sea. Another place to have a great time is the shopping mall where you can find and see different types of handcrafts. We have many places for going sightseeing around the city such as Dolphins park, horror castel, a place for entertainment, aquarium and etc. Furthermore, we can do various water sports and entertainment like jet-ski, scuba diving, sailing, surfing and parachuting. We are impressed by sea sports. It will be spectacular and unforgettable experience. The best thing about the entertainment is that we can enjoy every minute. Please let me know how it sounds before the weekend and also your flight number. Best regards, Parastoo

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