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In this letter , I will accommodate about Ha Noi .Ha Noi is a capital in Vietnam . It famous for food , landscape, places and activities entertaintment

In this letter, I will accommodate about Ha Noi. Ha Noi is a capital in Vietnam. It famous for food, landscape, places and activities entertaintment E9VQx
Dear Tho, In this letter, I will accommodate about Ha Noi. Ha Noi is a capital in Vietnam. It famous for food, landscape, places and activities entertaintment. When you to come Ha Noi you can enjoy delicious diskes like Bun cha, Banh che lam, ……. You can visit historical sites such as Quoc Tu Giam, Chua Mot Cot, …. . Besides you can talk a walk around Guom lake, visit Uncle Ho’s mausoleum and there are many more interesting fun activities. Hope to see you soon in Ha Noi. I look forward to hearing from you. Your friend, Thư
Dear Tho,

In this letter, I will accommodate about Ha
Noi
. Ha
Noi
is a capital in Vietnam.
It
famous
for food, landscape, places and activities
entertaintment
. When you to
come
Ha
Noi
you can enjoy delicious
diskes
like Bun
cha
,
Banh
che
lam, ……. You can visit historical sites such as
Quoc
Tu
Giam
,
Chua
Mot Cot, ….
.
Besides
you can talk a walk around
Guom
lake, visit Uncle Ho’s mausoleum and there are
many
more interesting fun activities. Hope to
see
you
soon
in Ha
Noi
.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Your friend,

Thư
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IELTS letter In this letter, I will accommodate about Ha Noi. Ha Noi is a capital in Vietnam. It famous for food, landscape, places and activities entertaintment

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98 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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