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To write a road near your house.Complain to the City Council.

To write a road near your house. Complain to the City Council. BWmGp
Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the road where I go to work every day. Firstly the way is very filthy, I and my children do not want to go on foot. Then, there is a deep, sometimes my children do not see. Thirdly, the road is very dark. Thers is no lamp. However, there is a traffic. Unfortunately, it is not working. Every we stay in a traffic jam. That is why we late for work. Last not at least, the road are rough. I hope the matter will be resolved. We want to fix up our road. Please, give extra money to do this. I look forward to hearing from you soon. In convinient for you. Your faithfully, Odina Soliyeva.
Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the
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road
where I go to work every day.
Firstly
the way is
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very
filthy, I and my children do not want to go on foot. Then, there is a deep,
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sometimes
my children do not
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see
.
Thirdly
, the
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road
is
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very
dark.
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Thers
is no lamp.
However
, there is
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a traffic
. Unfortunately, it is not working. Every we stay in a traffic jam.
That is
why we late for work. Last not at least, the
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road
are rough. I hope the matter will
be resolved
. We want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
up our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
, give extra money to do this. I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
. In
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convinient
for you.
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Your
faithfully
,
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Odina
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Soliyeva
.
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IELTS letter To write a road near your house. Complain to the City Council.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
124 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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