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A Construction Company finished renovations at your home recently. You are not happy with this matter in your Letter. explain what type of repair you are done what you are not happy about what do you suggest as a solution

A Construction Company finished renovations at your home recently. You are not happy with this matter in your Letter. explain what type of repair you are done what you are not happy about what do you suggest as a solution 7pARY
Dear Mr. Smith, I am Roshni Francis, residing at house number 6b in Green Street, Ernakulam whose house has been renovated by your company lately. I am writing this letter to inform you of one of my concerns regarding the renovation. Let me explain in detail. Firstly I have requested you to change all my doors and windows since they have become very old-fashioned. Secondly, I have asked you to repair my shower due to the leakage. However, after using the shower for a few days the leakage has again started and the problem has become worse than before because your workers had used the old and rusted shower head for the repair. I would like to request you that if you could change the showerhead with new and good-conditioned one as soon as possible. Despite this problem, everything is fine and I am delighted about that. Thank you in advance Yours sincerely, Roshni Francis
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am
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Roshni
Francis, residing at
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house
number 6b in Green Street,
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Ernakulam
whose
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house
has
been renovated
by your
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company
lately. I am writing this letter to inform you of one of my concerns regarding the renovation.

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Let
me
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explain
in detail.
Firstly
I have requested you to
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change
all my doors and windows since they have become
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very
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old
-fashioned.
Secondly
, I have asked you to repair my shower due to the leakage.

However
, after using the shower for a few days the leakage has again
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started
and the problem has become worse than
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before
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because
your workers had
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used
the
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old
and rusted shower head for the repair.

I would like to request you that if you could
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change
the
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showerhead
with new and
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good
-conditioned one as
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soon
as possible. Despite this problem, everything is
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fine and
I
am delighted
about that.

Thank you in advance

Yours
sincerely
,

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Roshni
Francis

IELTS letter A Construction Company finished renovations at your home recently. You are not happy with this matter in your Letter. explain what type of repair you are done what you are not happy about what do you suggest as a solution

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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