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A restaurant near your home is making a lot of noise. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter Describe the problems you are facing How it solve this problem and suggest solution What will you do if it cannot solve this problem

A restaurant near your home is making a lot of noise. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter Describe the problems you are facing How it solve this problem and suggest solution What will you do if it cannot solve this problem YLkyj
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter regarding the noise problem from your restaurant. I have lived near Yonge and Bloor street for over few years and I always satisfied with my neighbourhood, but the current environment is pretty stressful and distracted by that. Recently, My husband and I are having a rough time every single day around 6PM to late night. That time is really important moment for us, after working hard, we would love to have a peaceful dinner, read a book, or take a rest. However our time got disturbed by noise pollution. This also causes reducing our immune system due to lack of sleep at night. I would suggest to reconstruct the fence more higher or your customers be informed this issue to cooperate. I am wondering how you improve overall condition to change this situation. If it will not adjust, I might need to report to city council. I look forward to receiving your reply by return. Yours faithfully, Noa Park
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding the noise problem from your restaurant. I have
lived
near
Yonge
and Bloor street for over few years and I always satisfied with my
neighbourhood
,
but
the
current
environment is pretty stressful and distracted by that.

Recently, My husband and I are having a rough time every single day around 6PM to late night. That time is
really
important
moment for us, after working
hard
, we would
love
to have a peaceful dinner, read a book, or take a rest.
However
our time
got
disturbed by noise pollution. This
also
causes reducing our immune system due to lack of sleep at night. I would
suggest to reconstruct
the fence
more higher
or your customers
be informed
this issue to cooperate.

I am wondering how you
improve
overall
condition to
change
this situation. If it
will not adjust
, I might need to report to city council. I look forward to receiving your reply by return.

Yours
faithfully
,

Noa
Park
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IELTS letter A restaurant near your home is making a lot of noise. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter Describe the problems you are facing How it solve this problem and suggest solution What will you do if it cannot solve this problem

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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