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A restaurant near your home is making a lot of noise. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter Describe the problems you are facing How it solve this problem and suggest solution What will you do if it cannot solve this problem

A restaurant near your home is making a lot of noise. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter Describe the problems you are facing How it solve this problem and suggest solution What will you do if it cannot solve this problem YLkyj

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter regarding the noise problem from your restaurant. I have lived near Yonge and Bloor street for over few years and I always satisfied with my neighbourhood, but the current environment is pretty stressful and distracted by that. Recently, My husband and I are having a rough time every single day around 6PM to late night. That time is really important moment for us, after working hard, we would love to have a peaceful dinner, read a book, or take a rest. However our time got disturbed by noise pollution. This also causes reducing our immune system due to lack of sleep at night. I would suggest to reconstruct the fence more higher or your customers be informed this issue to cooperate. I am wondering how you improve overall condition to change this situation. If it will not adjust, I might need to report to city council. I look forward to receiving your reply by return. Yours faithfully, Noa Park

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding the noise problem from your restaurant. I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
 near Possible spelling mistake found.YongYong e
Yonge
 and Bloor street for over few years and I always satisfied with my Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbourhood' is British English.neighborhood
neighbourhood
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 environment is pretty stressful and distracted by that.

Recently, My husband and I are having a rough time every single day around 6PM to late night. That time is really
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 moment for us, after working This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
, we would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to have a peaceful dinner, read a book, or take a rest. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 our time This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 disturbed by noise pollution. This also
 causes reducing our immune system due to lack of sleep at night. I would The verb 'suggest' is used with the gerund form: "suggest reconstructing".suggest reconstructing
suggest to reconstruct
 the fence Use only "higher" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.higher
more higher
 or your customers be informed
 this issue to cooperate.

I am wondering how you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
overall
 condition to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 this situation. If it Consider removing 'will'. (Usually, 'will' does not occur in a conditional clause, unless in the sense 'want to' or 'be willing to'.)does not adjustdo not adjust
will not adjust
, I might need to report to city council. I look forward to receiving your reply by return.

Yours faithfully
,

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Noa
 Park

IELTS letter A restaurant near your home is making a lot of noise. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter Describe the problems you are facing How it solve this problem and suggest solution What will you do if it cannot solve this problem

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

167 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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