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You are having unpleasant issue at work. Write a letter to your friend who does the same job as you in a different company and say. Describe your job, describe the issue that you have, ask your friend for some advice

You are having unpleasant issue at work. Write a letter to your friend who does the same job as you in a different company and say. Describe your job, describe the issue that you have, ask your friend for some advice pawqd
Dear Simon, Hope this letter finds you radiant health amd best of spirits. I am writing this letter to seeking you assistance about unpleasant issue, which occur at my work. As you know, I recently joined this company and I have no previous experience related to Accounting work and I am unable to solve company issues at my own. I also feel scared to ask my colleague because of that I think you are the best person to assist me to solve this problem. On last weekend I had to print vendor's cheques but unfortunately I made a dreadful mistake I started printing cheques with new dimensions, as a result I was unable to print out correct dimensions cheques as all setting got disturb in system. So, I request you please provide correct cheque printing dimensions list as soon as possible. I am asking you because you also work in same software and you have fully knowledge of this software. Hoping to see you soon. Yours LovinglyAmanpreet Kaur
Dear Simon, Hope this letter finds you radiant health
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best of spirits. I am writing this letter to seeking you assistance about unpleasant issue, which occur at my work. As you know, I recently
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joined
this
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company
and I have no previous experience related to Accounting work and I am unable to solve
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company
issues at my
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own
. I
also
feel scared to ask my colleague
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because
of that I
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think
you are the best person to assist me to solve this problem. On last weekend I had to print vendor's
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cheques
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unfortunately I made a dreadful mistake I
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started
printing
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cheques
with new dimensions,
as a result
I was unable to print out correct dimensions
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cheques
as all setting
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got
disturb in system.
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, I request you
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please
provide correct
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cheque
printing dimensions list as
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as possible. I am asking you
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because
you
also
work in same software and you have
fully
knowledge of this software. Hoping to
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see
you
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soon
. Yours
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LovinglyAmanpreet
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Kaur

IELTS letter You are having unpleasant issue at work. Write a letter to your friend who does the same job as you in a different company and say. Describe your job, describe the issue that you have, ask your friend for some advice

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  American English
1 paragraphs
167 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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