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What are some assential qualities every teacher should have? What are some pros of studying on a distance learing course? Does everybody get equal opportunities to study?

What are some assential qualities every teacher should have? What are some pros of studying on a distance learing course? Does everybody get equal opportunities to study? KV2NR
The most important trait of a good teacher is a good listener. When you listen to your student's opinion, you will realize what do they want from your lesson, their perspective, from that, makes lessons more engaging, comfortable and productive In spite of several inconveniences, distance learning also brings some benefits. Firstly, it helps the student to study at their own pace. Secondly, student who study at remote area can have the opportunity to participate in class over the world. Last but not least, it makes student to be more self-study. In my opinion, education is not equal for all people. People who have better condition could have an ability to study in school with high tuition while the poor can’t have enough money to afford it.
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trait of a
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teacher is a
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listener. When you listen to your student's opinion, you will realize what do they want from your lesson, their perspective, from that,
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makes
lessons more engaging, comfortable and productive
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several inconveniences, distance learning
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benefits.
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the student to study at their
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own
pace.
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, student who study at remote area can have the opportunity to participate in
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over the world. Last
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not least, it
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student to be more self-study.

In my opinion, education is not equal for all
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people
.
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who have better condition could have an ability to study in school with high tuition while the poor can’t have
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enough
money to afford it.

IELTS letter What are some assential qualities every teacher should have? What are some pros of studying on a distance learing course? Does everybody get equal opportunities to study?

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