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Hello, dear Maria! I am very excited for your studens visiting, I'm sure that it's going to be really fun to have them here. My name is Alexia and i live in a small town named Bollebygd, close to Gothenburg. I live in a nice apartment close to centrum. I have a dad, mother, brother, cat and two hamsters, and I'm very happy to live with them! On my spare time i like to ride one specell horse named Bullen. He is brown and 21 years old islandshäst in swedish if you wondering. I ride him on fridays and Saturdays. I have many planes for the future but one i'm holding on to is that I want to live in a small house in the forset with many pets like dog, cats, horse, cows, yea you get it. I'm not sure what i want to work with but I like fashion alot so I'f been thinking of that. Okey I'm done talking about myself let's talk about what your studens can do here when they arrive. There are many stuff you can do here. Almost everything depends on what you want to do. We have many forest in Sweden so you can go and camping, go to a beach in the summer and live a very good camping life. Or If you want to relax we have very got hotels in Gothenburg for exampel, have a good massage and stuff like that so you can really relax when you are here. Or you can go to one of our very fun tride, Liseberg. I'ts very populor and a thousends of people visit Liseberg every year. So you se, we have things to do for everyone. But when your studens come I'm plannig to take a trip to Liseberg. I think they all gona love it! Even if you don't like roller coasters there is a lot of other stuff to do when you are there! You can be in the gamehall for exampel, Spelhallen in swdeish. And beacuse they are still studens we are going to learn som swedish when we are here. We gona do it in a fun way so they don't get boared. They are here to have fun! Okey i was also wondering what kinda of stuff you can do in spain. I know it's a warm land and many peapole go there to be in the sun and stuff like that. But what else can you do? I don't know very mush about that contury it whould be fun to learn more! Best regards, Aleixa!
Hello, dear Maria! I am
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excited for your
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studens
visiting, I'm sure that it's going to be
really
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fun
to have them here.

My name is Alexia and
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i
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live
in a
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small
town named
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Bollebygd
, close to Gothenburg. I
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live
in a nice apartment close to
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centrum
.

I have a dad, mother, brother, cat and two hamsters, and I'm
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very
happy to
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live
with them!

On my spare time
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i
like to ride one
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specell
horse named
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Bullen
. He is brown and 21 years
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old
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islandshäst
in
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swedish
if
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you wondering
. I ride him on
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fridays
and Saturdays.

I have
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many
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planes
for the future
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but
one
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i'm
holding on to is that I
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want
to
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live
in a
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small
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house
in the
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forset
with
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many
pets like dog, cats, horse, cows, yea you
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get
it.

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I
'm not sure what
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i
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want
to work with
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but
I like fashion alot
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so
I'f been thinking of that.

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Okey
I'm done talking about myself
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let
's talk about what your
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studens
can do here when they arrive.

There are
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many
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stuff
you can do here. Almost everything depends on what you
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want
to do. We have
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many forest
in Sweden
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so
you can go and camping, go to a beach in the summer and
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live
a
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very
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good
camping life. Or If you
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want
to relax we have
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very
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got
hotels in Gothenburg for
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exampel
, have a
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good
massage and
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stuff
like that
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so
you can
really
relax when you are here.

Or you can go to one of our
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very
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fun
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tride
,
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Liseberg
.

I'ts
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very
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populor
and a
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thousends
of
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people
visit
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Liseberg
every year.

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you se
, we have things to do for everyone.

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when your
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studens
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come
I'm
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plannig
to take a trip to
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Liseberg
. I
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think
they all
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gona
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love
it! Even if you don't like roller coasters there is
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a lot of
other
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stuff
to do when you are there! You can be in the
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gamehall
for
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exampel
,
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Spelhallen
in
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swdeish
.

And
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beacuse
they are
still
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studens
we are going to learn
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som
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swedish
when we are here. We
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gona
do it in a
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fun
way
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so
they don't
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get
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boared
. They are here to have fun!

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Okey
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i
was
also
wondering what kinda of
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stuff
you can do in
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spain
. I know it's a warm land and
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many
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peapole
go there to be in the sun and
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stuff
like that.
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But
what else can you do? I don't know
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very
mush about that
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contury
it
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whould
be
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fun
to learn more!

Best regards,
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Aleixa
!
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