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LETTER TO A FRIEND FOR THANKING HIM ABOUT HOLIDAY

LETTER TO A FRIEND FOR THANKING HIM ABOUT HOLIDAY 9wEep
DEAR MANISH, I HOPE YOU AND FAMILY ARE DOING FANTASTIC THERE. WEATHER THERE NOW MUST BE TOO GOOD FROM LAST MONTH. FIRSTLY, I WOULD LOVE TO TELL YOU THAT HOW WONDERFUL AND POSITIVE I AND FAMILY ARE FEELING THESE DAYS AFTER HAVING A GREAT TRIP WITH YOU IN MALDIVES. THE MESMERIZING VIEW OF SEA CAPTURED MY MIND AND EYES. I HAVE RECEIVED THE PICTURES OF OUR TOUR AND THEY MADE MY MEMORIES FRESH. IT WAS REALLY KIND OF YOU TO MAKE US ENJOY THE TRIP AND SHARING THE PICTURES. AFTER COMING FROM MALDIVES I GOT STUCKED WITH THE PROJECT OF FRANCE’S INVESTORS. DAY AND NIGHT, I WORKED AGGRESSIVELY ON IT THAT WE GOT OUR FUNDING OF 23 MILLION EUROS. I THOUGHT MANY TIMES OF WRITING TO YOU BUT WORK KEPT ME ENTANGLED IN IT. AFTER A MONTH; I GOT RELIEF FROM MY JOB AND NOW I HAVE ASSIGNED THE RELEVANT JOBS AND MADE MYSELF FREE. AS I TOLD YOU EARLIER THAT IN DECEMBER WE HERE IN ITALY HAVE A FESTIVAL THAT RUNS 3 WEEKS CONTINUOUSLY. IT WOULD BE MARVELOUS IF YOU AND FAMILY JOIN US IN CELEBRATIONS. DEAREST ANNA WILL ALSO ENJOY THE FEASTS WITH US. I HEARTILY INVITE YOU ALL TO COME HERE AND HAVE A BASH.
DEAR
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MANISH
,

I HOPE YOU AND FAMILY ARE DOING FANTASTIC THERE. WEATHER THERE
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NOW
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MUST
BE TOO
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GOOD
FROM LAST MONTH.
FIRSTLY
, I WOULD
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LOVE
TO
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TELL
YOU THAT HOW WONDERFUL AND
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POSITIVE
I AND FAMILY ARE FEELING THESE DAYS AFTER HAVING A GREAT TRIP WITH YOU IN MALDIVES. THE MESMERIZING VIEW OF SEA CAPTURED MY MIND AND EYES. I HAVE RECEIVED THE PICTURES OF OUR TOUR AND THEY MADE MY MEMORIES FRESH. IT WAS
REALLY
KIND OF YOU TO
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MAKE
US ENJOY THE TRIP AND SHARING THE PICTURES.

AFTER COMING FROM MALDIVES I
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GOT
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STUCKED
WITH THE PROJECT OF FRANCE’S INVESTORS. DAY AND NIGHT, I WORKED
AGGRESSIVELY
ON IT THAT WE
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GOT
OUR FUNDING OF 23 MILLION EUROS. I
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THOUGHT
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MANY
TIMES OF WRITING TO YOU
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BUT
WORK
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KEPT
ME ENTANGLED IN IT. AFTER A MONTH; I
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GOT
RELIEF FROM MY JOB AND
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NOW
I HAVE ASSIGNED THE RELEVANT JOBS AND MADE MYSELF FREE.

AS I
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TOLD
YOU EARLIER THAT IN DECEMBER WE HERE IN ITALY HAVE A FESTIVAL THAT RUNS 3 WEEKS
CONTINUOUSLY
. IT WOULD BE MARVELOUS IF YOU AND FAMILY
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JOIN
US IN CELEBRATIONS. DEAREST ANNA WILL
ALSO
ENJOY THE FEASTS WITH US. I
HEARTILY
INVITE YOU ALL TO
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COME
HERE AND HAVE A BASH.
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IELTS letter LETTER TO A FRIEND FOR THANKING HIM ABOUT HOLIDAY

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  American English
4 paragraphs
208 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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